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blow my mind.

far from perfect
  cigarette burns
  marked his territory
water-stained walls
    kept you in.

and yet
you continue
to blow
my
mind.

A contest entry

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  • movedon
    October 4, 2008

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    Very interesting write...great imagery. kind of saddening but well written

    ing alone,
    Mylee


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    June 22, 2008

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    Quite different. Nicely done for the prompt. Even with the one word lines, it works. Good job. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm