Nerves can't stand more feelings
Destroyed by a rotten core
They collapse
Repair
And stand
Author notes
Nothing's broken <- Used as a prompt.
A contest entry
- just a quickie ~ for those who love them... x by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 17, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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this poem reminds me of the saying "rotten to the core"...nicely written...makes those realize that when a person is "rotten to the core" , sooner or later they will collapse from it and be totally worn out
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Profoundly powerful.. x
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