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beyond repair?

Missing image
in the gentle hands
of the Master Craftsman
nothing is ever
beyond repair

even you

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15 poets
15 words
Prompt ~ nothing's broken
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  • songstress80
    June 22

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    such powerful and strong emotions put within short sweet words into one beautiful poem...i love this write...sometimes it doesn't feel like this poem is true, but if we look deep in our hearts we know that it is true


  • marlene47 silver member
    June 17, 2008
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    Such a great sentiment - repair is always at hand.
    Congratulations on the bronze.
    Marlene


    • Xianaria gold member
      June 17, 2008
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      Hi Marlene,
      Thank you! Sometimes these quickie prompts test you to see what's really important.

      ~ Tim


  • ellaelu
    June 17, 2008
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    very moving, and something I needed to be reminded of..


  • made with love
    June 17, 2008

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    that is very touching! i love these words you used; master, even, nothing, and ever. It touched me very deeply and think this poem will go very far, even though it is short because the meaning it has within it is so larg


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    June 17, 2008

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    Excellent

    A very fine, well crafted inspirational write, just as it is. Thank you for sharing this one with us.

  • midnightblue1272
    June 17, 2008
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    Sweet

    Very sweet words, Tim. You seem to know when to touch someone's heart. Good job.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 17, 2008
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    how beautifully touching... x

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