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06/16/08

Fingertips, they split and only left what's spilt.
Live.Love.Forget.
Forgive and taste, but leave no trace and paint a pretty picture in her head.
play a movie like this again, while lives live upon threads.
Tread lightly, and don't forget,
all your words,
leave your world
and live,'overturned, spinning, upside down in her head.
this love never forgotten,
never had,
always hid and never lived.
as both worlds, of both girls live upon cotton threads.
cotton lives
and cotton lies
always lay hid.
cotton threads break at the seam,
while cotton hearts, break on the SCENE.

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    Aww what a beautiful piece filled with emotions poured from the heart & soul.

    Wonderful write.

    Thanks for entering & best of luck