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[ Emotions running wild, ]

Emotions running wild,
like a story with no definate subject or ending.
Time to make the right move,
words are all you have now.
No time for thinking,
plans are not important at the moment.
Walking slow,
everything feels frozen.

Or is that just your mind racing?

Oh well,
too late now.
Thoughts consume you,
which words to say?
Maybe plans ARE important after all,
think faster.
Heart races,
breath grows short.

Speak!

Nothing,
no words at all.
Only blank stares,
clueless facial expressions.
Wait,
a smile.
Smile back,
this might be your last chance.
Nothing. . . nothing at all,
this moment has ended.

But wait!

Confidence shows,
bravery builds.
Words start to make sense,
sentences start to form.
Lean in closer,
whisper softly. . .

I Love You

Just a shorter version of my original, which will make its way on here soon!! Positive and/or negitive feedback welcome!!

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  • aangie
    August 1, 2008
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    I love this, every line made me wanna read more.
    Would love to see the original.