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Past Pains




I loved you,
with everything,
you betrayed me,
it's okay,
nothing's broken,
but my heart.

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  • HeavensDaughter
    June 20, 2008
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    Those are very powerful words...very sad. As always, a good write, sis.


  • Ronztrek
    June 17, 2008

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    Touching

    Betrayal, the worst crime in love that scares our heart so deeply. Sad but beautiful piece.
    Thank you for sharing, best of luck in contest.


  • Mark McNulty
    June 16, 2008

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    A very human feel to this, and personally gripping. A nice write for sure. Best of luck in the contest...


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 16, 2008
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    sadly expressive... x