Dark grey clouds
Engulf the clear blue skies
Blocking the gleaming rays
Of the radiant sun
The crisp air brushes past my skin
Blowing my flair white dress backwards
Sending shivers down my spine
As angelic raindrops fall fresh
From the open heavens above
I embrace nature’s elegance
And dance to the melodies of raindrops
I let the raindrops carry me away
To jump of the clouds with angels
And dance on the moon with stars
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Author notes
Option 7 : picture inspiration
A contest entry
- Options Contest for the Creative Mind by chasingwhiterabbits.
700 points, ended June 20, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really love this this!! I am in love the rain and all of natures beauty. Lovely write!!
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Holy, that was an amazing piece. The imagery was so clear and perfect, the flow was magnificent, your use of words was very sophisticated.
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Very pretty
Your use of words is amazing for someone so young. The weather brings so much inspiration , and you captured is with brilliance.
I'll definatly be back for more....beautiful job.
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Oh dear...this is STUNNING! I simply love this poem. It's full with imagery and beautiful words. Very very good work.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Keep writing
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weee,this is nice, the imagery and the use of nature is really capturing,
And dance to the melodies of raindrops
i love this line, you gave dancing in the rain a more beautiful discription
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This is a beautiful poem. My favorite part was the last stanza; the idea of jumping with angels and dancing on the moon is just magnificent.
Thank you so much for entering.
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