I can't believe I trusted you
you fooled me with all your lies
and you stand there like you don't care
don't you hear my painful cries
you hurt my brother horribly
you ruined his whole life
now deep inside my heart
lies a slicing knife
it's blackening my soul
this dark hole is sucking me in
why did you bring this hate on me
how could you hurt him
the knife is slicing deeper
but I'll try to stay strong
but when alone I break down
I can only hold it in so long
you deceivingly betrayed us
my heartache you'll never know
because to you and your family
this is one big show
so now I'm forever forgetting you
I'm cutting you out of my life
but just remember this
payback won't be so nice
this torment you brought upon us
will someday come to an end
but I will never forget
how I was betrayed by my best friend
A contest entry
- Broken Heart by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended July 31, 2008, 118 entries
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Comments
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Sadly this is called life, we meet good people as well as bad ones, the trick is we learn from it and try not to fall in the same trape towice. Very good write, it was vivid with anger and disappointment in thet someone.
~Noor
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wow this really spoke to my heart. mabe me want to cry. such immagry. such passion. i love the second stanza. and i like how you left telling us it was your best friend till the very end.
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Sis I know it is hard i know how you feel. You are right pay back for her and them won't be nice. they will get theirs. this blackening of my soul i have it to but i know we can get through this. remember if you ever need to cry or talk to some am here for you. this is a very truthful poem and i loved it so much awesome Job!
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