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[normal wear and tear]




normal wear and tear
going along for the ride

promises projecting
the fear of falling





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Prompt: nothing's broken

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  • songstress80
    June 22

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    what a rollercoaster! going through wear and tear during life and not just with equipment...to be covered and able to be fixed is the question at hand....
    nicely done!
    congrats on the honorable win!


  • notorious gold member
    June 16, 2008

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    "going along for the ride" and "the fear of falling" work together so well--you make me think of a rollercoaster. They're thrilling and amazingly fun, but also scary for some people. Some nice imagery and cleverly woven words...good luck.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 16, 2008
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    deeply meaningful and profound... x