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Making up



as I hold you
      in my arms

broken little pieces
      of our hearts
            become new


Author notes

thoughts of; Nothing's broken

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  • Aisades
    June 16, 2008
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    Yes...yes.. yes..


  • notorious
    June 16, 2008

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    This entire poem had perfect flow.
    The second stanza was especially evocative...The ending was hopeful..

    Good luck =]


  • Mark McNulty
    June 16, 2008
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    A very nice write. Touching and personal. Best of luck in the contest...


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 16, 2008
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    just beautiful... x