Wild lightning shoots eagle’s splendor,
thunder clapped in wing’s caress...
...skies freely speak the breeze
Author notes
15 words on "Nothing's Broken"
A contest entry
- just a quickie ~ for those who love them... x by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 17, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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truely a partriotic work! very nicely done! very beautifully written...continue the good work!
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Beautifully captivating and said...every line has a true feeling of freedom...nopthing broken here...
love the closing line...well done as always...
Best,
mystic
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You are on a stellar role tonight!! WOW!! Another beaut by you although I have to say that for whatever reason this brought to mind the great state of Alaska! Could be the reference to eagles,,,,Best wishes
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Great choice of background color...it's nice.
I wonder, has everyone gone with a nature theme? Anyways, the nature elements are clearly visualized by the reader and I love the reference to the eagle--reminds me of that contest...
If I remember correctly, you got Gold on that one...
Anyways, "wing's caress" is very poetic and I like how 'lightning' and 'thunder' are used within 2 lines--it's both visual AND noisy. Very clever...
Great end line as well...nice personification.
Good luck!!
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skies freely speak the breeze ~ I just love that line... x
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Oh this was truly a captivating write hun. You really expressed the prompt in such an original way with your brilliant metaphor. Amazing!
Best of luck Deserves gold indeed!
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Thanks Megz for the never ending encouragement!!
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wonderfuly penned here hon.
Great job in so few words.
Good luck
love
Passions
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Thank ya much Passions!!
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