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The war hammer of the gods

Gore comes falling form the sky
A nightmare
Nightmare

Horror on a scale that is mind boggling
Mushroom clouds shoot up into the sky
All around, all around

Those who survive
Survive will soon die in horrific ways
Blisters on them, turn blood red

Eye balls pop out
Pouring blood all over the ground
Such dark horror as this will leave you up all night

Sweating, such terror
As people scream their last
People violently attacking each other

With knives soaked with blood
Guns firing in all directions
This is the end of the world

A sea of blood there
Bodies piled up everywhere
Such blood stained carnage

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  • I enjoyed this read. I liked how, during the end of the world you put people turning on eachother, for us people are our own demise. Anyways, this is very well written and had some good imagery in there as well!

    Thanks for entering!

  • Before I can read this let alone judge this I must ask that you put the option in your authors notes like requested in the rules. Please and Thank you

  • sunshinegirl
    June 17

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    WOW!!!! This is dark, and yet very well written. I really enjoyed this one this morning!!

    Best of luck in this contest my friend!!

    and love

    Nyetta

  • Bob Fox
    June 17

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    dark

    Perhaps a part of the rapture is this description so vivdly . War and the violence of men that seems to be so much of history. Will we learn before the end of times?


  • Lady Altheia
    June 16

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    Interesting, in looking for what is wrong in the world, you miss what is right. All you will see what is wrong.
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