Rolling in the darkness
Fighting to breath
Rolling in the darkness
seeing the light
Hoping its calling someone else
All thoughts hoping for release
Fearing for your soul
Fear of letting go
Death
How right does it feel?
hoping in your passing
something right happens
something good come's of it
A whispered pray for her
on your lips
Glimps of little ones playing
light in their hearts
no fear of the world
No hate or anger in their
hearts
no heartaches in their eyes
no happy mermoies to scar
their hearts in a lonly life
wishing and hoping for the
release to come quickly
for the world to slip away
without pain
to end the pain by letting go
remembering only to love of
children
What did you think
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very beautiful in a sad way
u r amazing -
I can feel the pain.
I can feel the pain and emotion behind this work. Imaging is astounding. Great job!
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nice poem, unique style. i like it. it's good to write from your heart
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Nicely done
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I think it is wonderful if a bit on the scary side...I am not sure if you looking to dye easily or if you are hoping for the easy death of some else...but still like it and am going to go and read more...
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