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A Dream

I took your smiles
putting them away
letting them touch
my eyes everyday
I took your laughter
kept it hidden deep
just loving the sound
so bold and so steep
then I opened my eyes
you will never be mine

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7. Borrow affections, layaway dreams

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  • penman gold member
    June 19, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. best of luck in the contest.