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I'm just a fucked up kid

You dont have to be the who says sorry
I'm the one who's fucking up left right and centre
I dont know why I had to tell you but I did
And now I've probably lost you again....

Perfect!!!!

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I know its short

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  • Imperfect Beauty
    June 27, 2008

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    Amazing

    You'll never lose those who truely care about you. a great write babe. I'm sure you know i'm here for you


  • jstrauch
    June 17, 2008

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    YOU DIDNT LOSE ME so stop with this bs lol I Love you and no matter how stupid u are ill still love you


  • Melodies
    June 16, 2008

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    Oh, Flic, you are adorable and deserve a hug from your big Sis and a kiss, too! If you are messing up... that is part of how we learn. You are maybe a good learner.


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 16, 2008

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    Wow this is good... IT may be short but i like short poems i dont like reading so that a plus.. Its to the point and kinda sounds like me hehehe.....