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I miss you


I keep picturing your life
And what it should be
Not like this all cold and limp
Rotting under this tree

Rope scars I’m sure still
Rap around your neck
I can't help picturing your feet
Hanging below your deck

I look all around me seeing
Everyone who cares so much for you
If you could only see how much
Pain you put us all threw

I want to see you one last time just
To see a smile across your face
I really hope everyone is right
About this so called better place

All any of us want is for you to
Feel happy and not scared
Because you really don't understand
How much we all really cared

I hope you finally have peace
And dancing around in the stars
And I hope up there in heaven
You don’t remember any of your scares

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  • GuardianPhoenix7289
    October 17, 2008

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    Oh Sam...

    Why does this have to happen? I can't tell you, no one really can, I wish I could make you happier and feel better. I am so sorry for your loss, and I hope with time you've been feeling better. I too hope your friend is in a better place, he needs God to assure him everything will be alright.

    I kind of know (kind of) what you're going through, one of my old buddies from Freshman/Sophomore year in high school I heard died back in June from an OD on drugs, not sure what drugs, he was one of the nicest guys I knew, and he had to die. I think there was more to it than met anyone's eyes, but I guess we will all have to wait...

    Feel better hun,
    And talk to you soon,
    Love ya and always here for you,
    Alex