Puddles of wasted memories
From porcelain tears cried.
A rose that will shed every last scarlet petal
Until they become wilted and tortured.
Black, faded nightmares
Posess her fragile, glass soul
And make her a victim of
Love.
Author notes
Contest for Nighttime Angel:
http://catrina-nightrider.deviantart.com/art/Faerie-20555389
Pic:
http://s287.photobucket.com/albums/ll133/Nighttime-angel/?action=view¤t=darkangellove1.gif
A contest entry
- Semi - Quickie Contest 5 by Nighttime angel.
750 points, ended June 17, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honesty And Harsh Critique Please!
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Wow. It would seem that you have had the same experience of love that I have. I like the fact that the last word is love, it serves it's purpose very well. Keep up the good work!
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Stellar ending Ernesto..
"Black, faded nightmares
Posess her fragile, glass soul
And make her a victim of
Love. "
Simply beautiful. Ciao for now! -
Yep.. love can do that to you!! Great write cuz!!
Miss ya!
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not my style but a good poem thanks 4 the entery
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this is WICKED!!!!!! i love it!
xxAbbyxGracexx
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Thank's Sweets!
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you did a great job with the prompt. excellent poem. I love the last stanza a lot, especially the last line
good luck
kat
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awww great write sweetie, cute pics you got, take care, and good luck
stephanie
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http://s287.photobucket.com/albums/ll133/Nighttime-angel/?action=view¤t=darkangellove1.gif
hope you like this one. -
http://s287.photobucket.com/albums/ll133/Nighttime-angel/?action=view¤t=DREAMER_BY_TARIKT.jpg
if you don't like it let me know.. you have 1 more chance
kat
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