Come and be with me my love
For I will never lie
I'll always be with you my love
And stand right by your side
I'll never cheat, 'tiss all the truth
You mean the world to me
And I will keep your secrets safe
You can depend on me
I'll always put you first my love
In everything I do
I'll tend to every single need
When you ask me too
I'll wait on you hand and foot
You can just relax
I'll help you save your money
That you get from income tax
I'll never sell your property
We'll live in happiness
After we'er married, darling
Our life will be pure bliss
Author notes
A contest entry
- Lie to Me by Justin.
875 points, ended June 17, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you Think???
Comments
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Never Lie?
A woman who never lies?
Do they exist lol
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I love your spiderman it goes so well with your poem,
quite a twist.
truely clever sis,
I love it
good luck
God bless...
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I first off would like to commend you for the title... It worked well with both the prompt, and the poem itself. Yay for irony.
The rhymes in this were very good. I'm a fan of good meter, and this made me very happy... lol.
So many lies... yet so believable. well done!
thank you for your entry!
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