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Passions Goddess

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As the waves brush the shores of tender hearts,

and on the tides your luscious scent travels.

Many survivors will surely depart,

on the sandy shores their thoughts will unravel.

 

Amidst the colored skies, of blues and grays,

a passion of the waves will kiss the skies.

Within a silk-laced teddy, she sways,

across the soft waves of passionate cries…

 

Tenderly her ivory skins on fire,

sizzling atop these waters she glides.

Beneath or above these waves there’s desire,

in which all fall prisoner to her strides.

 

Heated her eyes of the darkest of browns,

can sure captivate any man around.

 

Upon this eve, she arrived feeling hot,

so within the winds she drifted to shore.

Her hands to her side she is at her spot,

where passions being perfectly explored.

 

Dark hair of a raven, now gently flows

within the mist of her storm she’s set free.

Laying close within his arms he now knows,

this perfect Goddess fits him so nicely.

 

Revealing skin as she loosens the straps,

her breasts are now beautifully exposed.

Nipples nice and taut, she straddles his lap,

face to face kisses, his manhood had rose.

 

His hands settled right above her warm hips,

as he pressed forward, sucking her hot lips.

 

As the wind blew, and they got lost in trance,

his hands moved rapidly, above her waist.

Seductively they played with romance,

when his palm passionately held her face.

 

Her hands had drifted below; she caresses

the growth rising against her white teddy.

Soft moans escape, as she now undresses

the man beneath her, as she gets ready.

 

Misting, the skies opened up, rain hits shore,

every heartbeat rapidly pounds within.
Seeking his face, longing for something more.

he spreads sweet petals, letting himself in.

 

Tenderly arching, she follows his drive,

releasing a storm within her loves hive.

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A contest entry for:
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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    July 8, 2008
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    What man could resist such temptation by such a Goddess of Rain as hhow it was remarkably written here. A magnificent gem that sparkles like a crazy diamond. I want to thank you for participating in the "Second Annual Goddess of Rain' contestTed E

    PS: I will be reading all entries at the minimum of twice to give maximum consideration.


  • Pisces Pieces
    June 25, 2008
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    Beautifully filled with passion!


  • ennovy silver member
    June 18, 2008

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    Awesome three golden reasons you have given to be that goddess of the rain...nicely done with an excellence of the masterful poetess. Very sensual and complete....novy


  • cricketjeff gold member
    June 18, 2008

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    Three tenderly beautiful sonnets for the price of one. Warm and sensuous, like the poet, great writing as ever, a joy to read.


  • Griswold silver member
    June 16, 2008

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    DAMN baby!! Now that was a write sweetheart. Excellent use of Sonnets to tell this story. You are amazing. I Love you...Scott


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    June 16, 2008

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    Fans face and reads again my sweet side kick you are the Queen of poetry winner wrote all over it

  • mcfreeman
    June 16, 2008
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    A lovely read


  • Cannonsfire
    June 16, 2008

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    And it should rain this beautiful ..Sensual tempting and so much to think about, love in the rain is delicious. Love, C

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