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The Calling

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Raindrops fall in pulsating beats
calling from darken skies,
from rough waves their songs
whispering love's melody.
Awaiting her Knight's triumph
lightning rips apart gray clouds;
"remove me from this vile isolation."

Opening her arms in difiance;
"take my soul, to his spirit"
Atonement in the stormy weather
washing away her pains, her sorrows.
She stands on the pier
remembering making love
in the pouring rain.

Unbeknown he's on the way...
alone in the rainy
night

Alone in the rain

Author notes

She is lonely, sad, and in sorrow because she thinks her love is loss.....

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    You always seem to write with such passion and wonderful description. This was no exception. It was marvelously written. This contest is going to be so hard to judge. I want to thank you for participating in the "Second Annual Goddess of Rain' contestTed E

    PS: I will be reading all entries at the minimum of twice to give maximum consideration.


  • z etoile
    June 26, 2008

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    This was amazing I really enjoyed this and could feel the depths of despair throughout this piece great job and thank you for sharing this with us.


  • Pearl-1
    June 18, 2008
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    awww novy..so romantic..good luck in the contest..xxx


  • PastelMoons gold member
    June 18, 2008

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    wow this is so incredible
    I hardly have the words
    this danced over my heart
    like a warm summers
    breeze, refreshing, enchanting,
    romantic....I love this!

    ~Pastel


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    June 17, 2008
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    its nice to make love anywhere , methinks

  • lielacgoddess
    June 16, 2008
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    very good

    i thought this was very good . i love the rain and sorrow is always a plus


  • jcat gold member
    June 16, 2008

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    Awwwww......I love love stories like this!!! To think that it can never be again only to look up and see him coming your way!!!! This was lovely....Best wishes!

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