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A Touch Goodbye

I touch your hand
without a word,
you cannot speak,
nothing is heard.

I sit by your side
as you lay there,
many prayers
fill you with care.

In a comatose state
you haven't passed,
I still sit here
as if it's your last.

I have hope for you
yet I say goodbye,
I hold your hand,
and softly cry.

Will you wake up?
it is not known,
I'm here for you
You're not alone.

I cannot believe
what has occured,
you still lie there
without a word.

A bad accident
put you here,
stuck in a coma,
death I fear.

There is a chance
that you may die,
in my heart
I say goodbye.
















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  • 2lullabyhaven
    June 26, 2008
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    So sad is this piece, wow, thanks for your entry lol