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Tennessee Waitress

      Tennessee Waitress

I have seen them in Brazil,
in Germany, France, Italy, Greece.
I have left tips for them in Amsterdam,
London, Tijuana, Montreal.
They flirt, tease, & talk trash
or smile & utter terms of endearment.

In Tennessee, a waitress came to my table.
She looked at me, she blushed.
Every word she spoke,
she looked at me & blushed.
Two women at the pool table,
playing to display themselves
were confident,
sure of where men’s eyes focused.

When she brought the check,
I asked her: Do you know
what makes you better than those two
women at the pool table?

No… What?  she asked.

You can blush I told her.
Do you know who Ernest Hemingway was?

Yes she said.

Hemingway wrote: A woman who can’t blush
is worthless.

Did I blush? she asked.

Every time you spoke to me I said.

If Hemingway wrote that, she said
it must be true.

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  • motel silver member
    December 31, 2008
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    thanks.
    bookmarked.


  • Ariosto II. gold member
    June 19, 2008

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    Gold nuggets in the wilderness. As one who lives in the midst of it, I can testify that they are there. More precious by their rarity.


    • mtpoet
      June 22, 2008
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      Thanks so much for reading and this comment, ariosto. I will return the favor... You are correct in your conclusion as well...


  • mona
    June 17, 2008
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    cute poem enjoyed reading


    • mtpoet
      June 22, 2008
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      Thanks, mona... Hope all goes well for you and yours...


  • tara wilson gold member
    June 16, 2008
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    what a beautiful poem

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