This day was way too long.
Even had to stay late at work.
Though I sit on my ass all day
somehow my feet still hurt.
Dinner was on the fly tonight.
Just a dog with beans.
Can't believe it's bed time.
Never enough time it seems.
It's days like these
I reflect and sigh.
If you give it the chance,
it will whiz right by.
So I give you what is left,
lame rants about my day.
Maybe you understand
why I have nothing more to say....
A contest entry
- Give me what you've got by Sound of Madness.
450 points, ended June 30, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The worse poem ever by Darkwell.
450 points, ended July 9, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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clearly the randomness an missin parts of the day and jumpin from dinner to bed time gets you some poo but not much
even rhymin stuff like work an hurt worked so you lose poo for good rhymes. this could be alot worse an you know it 
on a scale of 1-10, 10 bein the worse poem ever
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I think “ass” might have been put in for shock value. I wasn’t shocked but it did take away some of the admiration I try to have of APs poets. I think this would have been more profound if “more” was edited out of the last line. I don’t think it is going to qualify as bad. Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks for entering my contest, I wish you much luck.
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i do understand... more than you realize some times...
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