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never again

It corrupts my mine,

taking over my senses,

and all i know of it,

is it is you.

you said those things,

lied you ass off,

and i believed you,

i actually believed you.

so now that i have this problem,

you take nothing in part.

instead, just good luck.

hey,

screw you too.

so i'm left with this problem,

and no one to help me,

for i am shunned by all others.

congrats to you,

you got what you wanted.

you left everthing behind.

but hey,

we are not important,

or so you say,

so what's it matter?

well,

i don't need you anyway,

i can find a home,

for both me and her.

just two more months,

until i have her.

and i can't wait.

she is the only good thing you ever gave me.

so when you come back to see her face,

forget about it,

you lost it now.

you abandoned us,

and she was still so fragile,

so small.

and now she is all mine,

and i thank you for this little miracle.

go away,

so that we can live in peace.

don't corrupt my body,

my mind or soul.

just leave us alone,

and all of us will stay happy

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  • Darkwell
    June 27, 2008

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    i like the way you penned this about his irrisponsibilness an your ability to focus on her an that part of that was him not bein a part because hes a problem

    and now she is all mine,
    and i thank you for this little miracle.
    go away,

    nice


  • Cerbie20
    June 25, 2008

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    this is good. it reminds me kind of like where the heart is... did you write it based off of that?

    so now that i have this problem,

    you take nothing in part.
    instead, just good luck.
    hey,
    screw you too.
    so i'm left with this problem,
    and no one to help me,
    for i am shunned by all others.
    congrats to you,
    you got what you wanted.
    you left everthing behind.
    but hey,
    we are not important,
    or so you say,
    so what's it matter?

    good part!


  • Pretty Britty
    June 16, 2008
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    I will enjoy myself!
    I will!
    I'll send you a postcard from Spain