The feeling that I am alone has become too overwhelming. I'm suffocating in my own skin. The longer my heart continues to beat, the less I feel like I can breathe. I try to scream out for someone to save me but I don't even know how to save myself. Maybe if my heart stopped, this feeling would disappear. I constantly hand out what's left of my heart piece by piece but never receive anything in return. Does anyone even notice the pain in my eyes or do they even care to look? Maybe if I'm gone, someone will finally notice that at one point in time, I was here, crying out for someone to need me as much as I needed them.
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You have my attention
Write me if you need to talk
Read "My Precious Victom"
On my focus poems
The past we may dred or regret
Ahead is always the way to happyness
Rick
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Great job! I can really relate to this. its amazing. Keep writing, its a good way to let things out! =D
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um wow!!
Its not really in poem formate! but its amazing! I understand it 100% You are a realy good writer keep it up
~*~Jamie~*~
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I can relate to this a lot. The thoughts of suicide, and wondering if anybody would care or if they ever notice that you're hurting so badly, you don't know what to do with yourself.
Poetry is a wonderful thing I believe; because you can express yourself with words instead of something else, which helps keep some people semi-sane.
Beautiful write. :]
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Quite the artful way to put your anguish into words. Finally, someone who feels a true emotion, how long I've longed to see such writing.
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