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Changing Moon

Missing image

Looking to the heavens

I watch the changing moon

Always glowing in supremacy

over my empty life of gloom

 

Sometimes

I see your sweet face

smiling lovingly down at me

Assuring

me things will change

the message is wait and see

 

Other times your face is sad

covered with clouds of scorn

Revealing a dark hatred

hiding a love forlorn

 

Does it really make a difference

when the moon looks down on me

The dreams that I want to fulfill

are hopes never meant to be

 

So dear moon keep smiling

and please wear your happy face

I'll always watch you in the heavens

and admire your healing grace

 

 

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  • Sagerider
    June 17, 2008
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    Great write.

    I enjoyed the read.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    June 17, 2008
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    the moon captivates us and inspires us to write poems such as this good luck xx


  • arafura gold member
    June 17, 2008

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    "So dear moon keep smiling
    and please wear your happy face
    I'll always watch you in the heavens
    and admire your healing grace"

    Well done poet!


  • chasingwhiterabbits
    June 16, 2008
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    This is a pretty poem. I say that the first stanza is my favorite.

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