Gazing at them i blink back a tear
Brushing over so slightly with my fingertip
Realigning my gaze to the cracked glass
Now spotted: with blackening age
Where a naked form is reflected
Tracing their fingers over the scars
Of a broken past.
A contest entry
- Quickie:: Are you up for it? by Fallen Grace.
600 points, ended June 18, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You went over the 30 word limit, but your poem is still a beautiful piece of art. It has wonderful imagery and I really like it. You did an amazing job!
Thank you for entering!
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Beautifully-Bound
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oops
i misread, thought it was 30 line limit -
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thats okay.
its a beautiful poem all the same! =]
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