Gregarious joker,
always juggling,
pleasing pleasing, never judging.
On command I make you laugh.
Beck and call girl...
giving giving, on your behalf.
King of the castle,
sitting in his chair,
eyes glaze over with my despair.
Please king please
I need some reciprocation,
"Feel free to juggle in any formation!"
A contest entry
- Give me what you've got by Sound of Madness.
450 points, ended June 30, 2008, 25 entries
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amen
Guess its a Minikin thing.
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I like this....it's tough to bend and scrape for others and not get the appreciation deserved!
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Thank you.... although this is my least fav. piece... couldnt get the flow... just kinda needed to get it out ya know? I'm embarassed this is all you know of me, LOL... Silly...I know!
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This was really interesting, and I've never read anything quite like it before. I wish you much luck in my contest.
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this is interesting.
i kind of wish it had a set rhythm because it came off a bit choppy as i read it...
the poem itself is thought provoking though... im still kind of trying to figure it out. trying to figure out if there IS anything to figure out.
i dont really know what to think.
i liked it though.
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there are things to figure out, but i agree...i just couldnt get the rhythm down. i was going to delete it, but decided to keep it and come back to it later...maybe im too close to it to see the other way, you know?
its about relationships. and the lopsidedness that can occur...about not being seen.....etc.
thank you for reading, and for your honest comments!!
check out some of my other stuff...i swear its better 
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