caught
in a net of claws
dinner!
A contest entry
- SURVIVAL HAIKU by Swan song.
650 points, ended June 23, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderfully done on the image provided.
Short simple and direct to the point
Splendidly done indeed
Congrats on the bronze
Tony
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Like the net of claws! Can you just imagine what that fish is thinking?
Congratulations on the bronze
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Thank you and no, can't imagine what fish is thinking but the photograph was extremely powerful!
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Apostrophy
bothers me
personally
but the image
is immense!
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Thanks for the comment on haiku and your comment was interesting--short form almost like a haiku itself!
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lol i like this funny to and yet nice creative imagery in the secionbd line
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Thank you for the comments on haiku and really when you said it made you laugh and you thought nice creative imagery--well that made my day--thank you!
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Excellent
Such a wonderful creation. So very well done for a haiku. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you for your comment on haiku (a form favorite).
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Oops I commented in the wrong one!
This is a delightful haiku abd I love the 'aha' moment at the end.....dinner!
All the best with this
Gaylene
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Thank you, thank you especially for the 'aha' moment--my nemesis with haiku!
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Thanks for the comment on haiku! Thought the photograph was so vivid in this contest!
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Great work friend. Crystal clear imagery!
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Thank you for the comment on haiku. Çan you tell I really enjoyed this contest and haiku is one of my favorite hobbies?
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tragic but sounds delicious.
A vivid few lines wrap up so much action and thought. Lucky bird, and unlucky us sometimes, when we are caught in a net of claws.
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YES GREAT DINNER, WE ARE ALL IN THE FOOD CHAIN. GOOD LUCK XX
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Good haiku that goes so well with the photo prompt, really descriptive in L2. Good luck in the contest!
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ohh, i will get the bread then. oh we are not eating the bird, it is the bird eating. oh well i will just starve then, a good poem.
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you have matched this picture perfect...caught, claws and dinner is served...
has to be a winner!...
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