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Beautiful

Like a heartbeat
The pain,
The struggle,
The breaths,
The words,
The tears,
The thoughts,
The hope,
The light,
The dark,
The start,
The end,
The girl,
The bed,
The boy,
The lost,
The scared,
The broken,
The hurt,
Look away,
Look away,
Look away,
Done deed,
The boy leaves again.

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Like a heartbeat, I wonder if you can tell what this is about, how I feel,?

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