Glorious memories
I treasured,
Bringing back to life,
Heart, full of affection
Rose, he always gifted
Love, I could still feel
Never did he step out
Darling of my heart
Flew away suddenly,
Painful eyes still long for him.
Author notes
G I B H R L N D F P
A contest entry
- I start it for you :) by peridotPixi.
440 points, ended June 19, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i really love the thoughts of the burried treasures here and the eyes still longing for him, i like the words you have choosen for the stupid letters i gave you, good luck in the coentest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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thanx for appriciating
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Well written dear...Just a little patience and together you shall be Inshallah..
All the best!
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G I B H R L N D F P
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