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Your Name On A Bullet

[Chorus 1]
When you pulled that trigger
With your finger
(You never knew)
When you pulled that trigger
With your finger
(That I'd still love you)

[Chorus 2]
You didn't even say goodbye
You put my name on that bullet
So I put your name on a bullet
Now I'm savin' it for suicide days
I hope they never come
But I'll never know how I feel anyway

I told you not to go
I told you that I loved you
But you said," no
this is somethin' I have to do"

You left behind all your memories
All your photographs
Lookin' at them used to make me laugh
But now all I do is cry
Derrickean, why?

[Chorus 1]
When you pulled that trigger
With your finger
(You never knew)
When you pulled that trigger
With your finger
(That I'd still love you)

[Chorus 2]
You didn't even say goodbye
You put my name on that bullet
So I put your name on a bullet
Now I'm savin' it for suicide days
I hope they never come
But I'll never know how I feel anyways

I told you I loved you
I let you inside
I opened you like no other guy
I always run and hide
But you showed me the truth
The whole bloody, fuckin' truth

I guess this is goodbye
Even tho I wish I knew why
I know I can't bring you back
But I wish I could
But I know I can't

[Chorus 1]
When you pulled that trigger
With your finger
(You never knew)
When you pulled that trigger
With your finger
(That I'd still love you)

[Chorus 2]
You didn't even say goodbye
You put my name on that bullet
So I put your name on a bullet
Now I'm savin' it for suicide days
I hope they never come
But I'll never know how I feel anyways

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  • Christina-is-crazy
    June 18, 2008

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    This is a great poem, or song what ever you would prefer it to be called, But i did notice a few things wrong with it. Like in chorus 2, on the 14th 11, it says "But now I'll I do is cry" and i think it was supposed to be, "But now all i do is cry". Im not trying to be harsh becasue it is a great poem/song, i just thought i'd let you know, Dont worry you still have a good change of winning , Im not a harsh judge , lol
    ♥ Christina

  • JWGoethe
    June 17, 2008

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    This is quite cool. Would make an excellent song. I feel your pain, so clearly it was expressed. (Don't pull the trigger, just write it all down and get it out where it can do no harm)