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Faceless

Missing image
let it rain down on me,
and wash the pain away.
I can't find the words,
there's so much to say.

It's a long road ahead,
I believe I'll survive.
Just go off without me,
move on with your life.

I want you to be happy,
like a fairy tale theme.
A husband and his wife,
and the american dream.

I'll be fine by myself,
as my heart beats race.
This man who was better,
when nobody saw his face.

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  • Midnight Firefly
    July 3

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    i come back for the first time in god only knows how long it's been, and i find a very upsetting poem waiting for me. granted, i'm not one to talk, when you take a look at all my poems..
    ANYWAYS!! i love this.. the flow is awesome, and it pulls at my emotions.

    i miss reading your stuff.
    hope life is better than the poem portrays.
    -amanda.

  • ChibberMonkey
    June 25

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    First I was shocked.. I was like. Oh my gawd.. Ryan wrote something new.. And then I got real sad because I realized that you've actually been writing recently and I havent kept up on it...And then I read this...*le sigh*...your writing always touches me... (not that way you goof! )... Anywho...I hope you know what I'm trying to say...because if you don't..well. I'm going to sum it all up----->>>> I've missed you so, my dearest♥ And I'm really happy to see new writings from you. This was superb.


  • Radical Ryan
    June 19

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    omg
    this poem was amazing
    my favorite part was:

    "I want you to be happy;
    Like a fairy tale theme"

    That was amazing
    loved it
    ♥ Ryan

  • Lost Vampyre Angel Greeters member
    June 16

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    wow this is so so beautiful,
    i hope your ok hun, i love this poem,
    its beautiful and it meant so much to me,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx
  • jenan21
    June 16

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    You'll be okay darling. I promise. And, I'm sorry. Your poem is beautiful btw.

  • xDisasterous Angelx
    June 16

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    Wow alot of emotion in this one. I love it, shows what true heartache is.
    keep up the good work.

    mandy

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  • Eyes Wide Shut gold member
    June 16

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    Awe, this is really sad Ryan. It portrays such heartbreak - I hope you're feeling okay.

    Always here,
    Austyn


  • Viyanna Rosemarie
    June 16

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    how very sad this write is from you. it broke my heart as i read of the sadness and pain. thank you for sharing this with me today and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie

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