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Second Annual Goddess of Rain

As I walk
And the ocean flows
So my emotions go

Waves of blue
Skies that move
Walking through water and sand

Second annual
Goddess of rain
That's how my feelings go

Hoping
I wont be below

Author notes

sorry its not my best =(

A contest entry

Its honestly not my best I was watching a movie while writing

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    July 8, 2008
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    It may not be your best, but you did wonderful in giving a sweet description of the Goddess of Rain. I want to thank you for participating in the "Second Annual Goddess of Rain' contestTed E

    PS: I will be reading all entries at the minimum of twice to give maximum consideration.


  • Grandaddy-Kush
    June 19, 2008

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    excellent poem about the ebb and flow of human emotions. it reminds me of "dover beach" by Matthew Arnold.