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It Won't Soon Be Forgotten

 

 

Two instances
begging, crying
Keep running fast
Pleading
Left maimed

 

 

A contest entry

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  • movedon
    July 24, 2008
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    Beautiful. Wonderful. Amazing.

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • peridotPixi
    June 18, 2008

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    This poem is short and the words do say a lot, i love the feelings you have used here and the great job you have done with the letters provied, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the beautiful writing, ~Amy

  • peridotPixi
    June 16, 2008
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    T I B C K R F P L M

    have fun