Don't say the words
i was longing to hear,
saying, "I'll love you forever."
Don't look at me
with those beautiful eyes
saying goodbye.
Don't move an inch,
much less the miles
set to separate us.
Don't kiss me that way;
as you go,
leaving me behind.
Don't walk away,
as i look longing
for you to stay.
Author notes
alright, so it's not the greatest poem, but it came straight from my heart. my bf just left for texas nd it's killing me.
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- don't tell me goodbye. by Sun-shiney.
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* tears* today was the last day posibly we saw eachother. and ya he did just that ill miss him so much i don't want him to be a a step away let alone miles. oh and i love it.
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it good
that a good poem but try to make it ryrimy more sry for the bad spelling of mine
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