Half moon hangs low and lonely tonight
Aries lit in the night sky
Keeps me longing for another child
Last round before my eggs go bad
Possibly not meant to mother
Whatever that means to anyone
Babies all around me
Frown upon my face
Should I continue to believe or
Carefully bury the notion
Author notes
10 letters , each beginning the new sentence
H A K L P W B F S C
I have one living child and one dead child. My living does not reside everyday with me. my dead haunts me still. and my dreams of more children are battled everyday.
In a list
A contest entry
- I start it for you :) by peridotPixi.
440 points, ended June 19, 2008, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this poem is really deep and emotional for you, you did a wonderful job with the letters thank you for sharing something so close to your heart with me, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Well done with that! To take ten random letters and turn it into such an emotional piece as this! Great job!
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H A K L P W B F S C
have fun
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