Restlessly awaiting your arrival
Anxious for things to be perfect
Planning every thing down to the letter
Laying rose petals across the marble
Making sure your first sight is impressive
Imagine my surprise when you telephoned
Telling me that you were coming
Cocktails are ready in the kitchen
Kiwi and strawberries cut and waiting
Watching for your return
Author notes
My letters were R A P L M I T C K W
A contest entry
- I start it for you :) by peridotPixi.
440 points, ended June 19, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i really love the thoughts you have put into this wonderful poem i love the deep feelings and the phone ringing you know that i am constanly waiting for his return, even when he is here, i know he will be going somewhere agian and that my life revloves around the military and the waiting, thank you for the wonderful entry, good luck and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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R A P L M I T C K W
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