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If I fall

Bleeding out
From my broken heart
As I lay grounded to the dirt
I've been down this road before
I've given in
I've just quit
There's just no point
Just forget my name
Forget my face
It's better in the long run
Tear up the memories
If they hurt you so much
Leave me here
Stranded in the dirt
You pick me up
To throw me back down

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  • weebabycole
    August 3, 2008
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    good poem its got great emotion.