Hour glass body.
Tight dress making me exciting.
High heel shoes.
Makes her ass pumped to use.
Long beautiful hair.
Thick silk dancing in the air..
Pulling her panties down her dress.
She started kissing me - yes success.
Smooth soft skin.
My hands venturing her body within.
The sound of a woman’s moan.
Gives me pleasure - of my own
Not much time - on where we were at
She unzipped me then went for an attack.
The pleasure was so great.
I almost exploded inside her face.
I lifted her over this seat.
Then gave her all of my meat.
Slowly with every stroke.
She bucked then moaned and moaned.
Explosions I did receive
Then she turned around - then took every seed - inside of me…
Author notes
Aim I Am in AN
This is my first Erotica...
JackReed3
A contest entry
- Almost Anything Goes by righteousme.
900 points, ended June 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sizzling Hot by Fire-Fly.
500 points, ended November 25, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Comments
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Oooh like this one very much - you've hit the balance really well between making it hot and keeping it from being too much so.
Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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Wow, for your first or second or even one hundreth this would definitley be considered a terrific write! Great write!
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wow. great write but not what i was after... thanks again...
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Wow this was HOTT!! Sensually seductive, and enticing with your haughty words! After reading this, I'm gonna need a cold shower
Haha.
Amazing write. You sure nailed erotica for writing! -
did you read the rules, or lack thereof , cos your bordering on the DQ list... recheck them and let me know...
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rhyme and erotica... do they go together... hmmm... i liked the overall picture you painted , however... so thank you for your time and talent...
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Not too bad for a first effort... there's a rawness to this like the act you describe... ovetaken by need. Well done...
Ken
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