Lover's leap or lovers part-
Everlasting questioning, no one knows, so
They won't tell the reason for this game
Bitter angst spun with woe
Makes the story grow with time,
Cut it, dice it, it doesn't matter, it all comes out the same.
Peripheral view, or hindsight twenty twenty?
We'd all like to know the truth.
Fornicated nightmares and lies
drenched in sorrow, in comparison, they're tame.
Author notes
So.. That end line rhyme, came out of no where. As did this poem... >>'
A contest entry
- I start it for you :) by peridotPixi.
440 points, ended June 19, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i love the title you have used and the thoughts about the lover's parting, i love the feelings and you did a wonderful job with the letters i gave you, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Very nicely done... not so easy, huh?
Not sure I could have done this well with those letters 
Fornicated nightmares and lies... I really like that... I'll try not to steal it (LOL)... Well done.
Ken
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have fun
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