Maiming smiles
all over dented frowns ,
core just sore with damming
lost and found sorrows,
hidden from your view.
Roped in all my courage,
pulling my sleigh through
lined pavements of snow
mounted as hurdles,
till life smiles at me.
Author notes
M A C L H R P L M T
A poem with each line started with words with given alphabets!
In a list
A contest entry
- I start it for you :) by peridotPixi.
440 points, ended June 19, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i really love the wonderful job you have done with these letters, i love the deep feelings and the beautiful thoughts, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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forgot!!!!1
All the best for the contest
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Thanks a lot...I remind myself of hope Allah bestowed on us always...
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excellent
Roped in all my courage,
pulling my sleigh through
lined pavements of snow
mounted as hurdles,
till life smiles at me.
these lines really good. i liked the way u took it. they really show a great ray of hope in life. excellent.
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excellent!
oH! I like this
i LOVE: "
Roped in all my courage,
pulling my sleigh through
lined pavements of snow
mounted as hurdles,
till life smiles at me.">>>great stanza!!
such a cool contest too, you've done really well with the letter prompts
best of luck in the contest~
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Thank you so much!
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M A C L H R P L M T
have fun
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