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Pluthora Of Ramblings

 

Planted thoughts and pleasant dreams

Asphyxiated on what it seems

Gradient lives overturned by lust

Hurtful secrets betrayed by trust

Lucky strikes of withered blows

Killed at the scene that you chose

Tainted words of love and luck

Roaring futures that run amuck

Sutured bandages of metaphors

Wasted energy that he ignores

 

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  • NyteShade
    July 20, 2008
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    Love the structure of this piece, and your choice of words. Nicely done.


  • peridotPixi
    June 18, 2008

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    i really love what you have done with those crazy letters, i love the picture you have added and the deep thoughts you have placed with those letters and wonderful lines, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the beautiful writing, ~Amy


  • Fading.Heart
    June 18, 2008
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    Wow I love it


  • peridotPixi
    June 16, 2008
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    P A G H L K T R S W

    have fun