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[ I am emotion caught within a cage ]

I am emotion caught within a cage
always looking a way to get myself
free,  as sadness I feel with the
lowest degree

I seek for my own lost but sad soul
each day for me is a fight for my
freedom lost personal spirited goal

each moment I feel a mix of emotion
always caught in between of my own
commotion

I pray to the eagle and I pray to
the humans god,  please please set me
free,  I cry with emotion and I cry
without tears,  for what is life if
life is nothing but unseen fear.





A contest entry

please comment on my poetry-lion airs

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  • Mistress Masquerade
    June 16, 2008

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    I like the way you put this together though some lines seem awkwardly placed, none the less your write interested me and the last stanza was by far my favorite. YOur rhyming seemed easy and not forced. Thank you for entering.