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Only in Texas

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Texas is the place,

To flee from stressy days,

Just bashing in the sun,

And being who you want.

 

Texas is the place,

None to remember your face,

When you make a fool,

 of yourself.

 

Texas is the place,

To toss away your grace,

Don't worry about perfection,

Just lie down in the sand.

 

Texas is the place,

Where no one can be misplaced,

For everyone belongs,

To the burning suns heat.

 

Texas is the place,

To hide from the chase,

Of tomorrows stress,

Just take your days.

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  • I like the imagery in this. You have captured the place well. I have a cousin who lives in Texas. The weather there is so hot. This was quite funny too. Gave a sense of lazy days relaxing in the sun.

    Well done
    With
    Dark
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x

  • babydoll15
    June 18
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    wonderful!

  • Sprite silver member
    June 17

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    I have lived in Texas and am glad that you feel this way actually. I found it very hot there. The pace is relaxed, but if you live there you can't get away from the ones who see you do those silly things.

    The lines "Out on yourself" is a bit awkward. The phrase here would be "making a fool of yourself."

    A delightful poem. ~ Joyce


    • Meroza gold member
      June 17
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      Thank you for saiving me from mt bad gramma I'll edit it right away.

  • daviscth gold member
    June 16

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    Thanks for this enjoyable read. The picture is pretty cool too.

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