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A New Wave

A "Renaissance" is taking hold

"One Rationale" of mankinds future direction,

'Which One?" you may ask,

just "A Simple View"

to "Walk Nature's Path"

in "Superlative Sway".

 

 

At present we reside

in "The Eye Of The Storm",

"A Peaceful Place"

with dischord "Absolutely Zero",

yet as society's squall emerges

on the other side,

we are "Doused" with the "Fate"

governments would inflict.

 

 

Yet each of us is a unique "Being",

while at the same time belonging

within "The Family Shack" of life

and together we breathe "A Merged Lifetime",

so embrace this second chance

of renewal with gusto.

 

 

And while we beat the drums as one

harmony is the goal

and eventually we will reach tranquility's mountaintop,

for I have already achieved this place within my soul,

because "It's Simple With You"

 

 

 

 

 

 

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My 15 Titles - Renaissance, One Rationale, Which One?, A Simple View, Walk Nature's Path, Superlative Sway, The Eye Of The Storm, A Peaceful Place, Absolutely Zero, Doused, Fate, Being, The Family Shack, A Merged Lifetime, It's Simple With You.

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  • Electric Sunrise gold member
    June 25, 2008

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    Excellent job, it's short, sweet, and for the task a great example of what someone can do with a little creativity.

    I was a little uncertain how people would take the task but this is definitely a wonderful piece.

    Thanks for the entry and best of luck


  • penman gold member
    June 18, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such a wonderful creation. Great poem for the title. Best of luck in the contest.


  • daviscth silver member
    June 17, 2008
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    This is an excellent take on the prompt!!! All the best of luck to you dear.


  • Princess Perdue gold member
    June 16, 2008

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    Well.... I had to take a look at the contest to understand where you were coming from, I must say what a fab idea and you have done a brilliant job and presented a marvellous entry for the contest...Hat off to you sis...I don't think I'd be brave enough to take this one on, but like I said...excellent job here. Well done and all the best in the contest.

    Shaz xx