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and we are all ripples
loud and circular and strange
and from our souls we
extend breathing fire,
biting at hands, cursing God
who cast the first stone.

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  • Kate-the-Shrew
    July 6, 2008
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    ...Damn, you're a cynic. I love it!! Really, such brilliance in brevity. Well spoken, my friend!