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Doused

The embers tease and hypnotise

within their depths secrets disguised,

then tiny flames they lick and taunt

and in my mind memories do haunt.

 

And as the flames begin to flicker

they join together, burning quicker,

reaching out in fierce pursuit

climbing higher in heat acute.

 

That's when the memories of you and I

come searing back, I can't deny

and tears fall straight into the ashes

the fire's doused to tiny flashes.

 

I let those dancing flames die out

and in this cold I do without,

the fire inside has all but died

as I feed this one my tears have dried.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt - Fire

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  • penman gold member
    June 19, 2008
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    Excellent

    what a wonderful creation for the prompt. So well crafted. Best of luck in the contest.


  • The Poetic Angel
    June 17, 2008

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    great write using the prompt mum

    xxx cheeky xxx