Life can most assuredly rip you apart.
It'll knock you down and break your heart.
An albatross you drag around
seeking peace which can't be found.
You think that you are all alone,
and any comfort is long since gone.
Are you a righteous one in God?
Which is your path on which you trod?
We must think hard on what we feel.
Rightstanding with Him is what is real.
"Toss away all of your fears," He does say.
You will then stand in a victorious way.
If you abide by his blessed laws,
you will avoid your enemies claws.
The enemy is Satan, he wants your soul.
Don't give in, you must be bold!!
Give God all your cares in life, today.
Sing songs of joy along your way.
Show others what joy you have, and peace.
Show them how fear will gently cease.
Author notes
C. Psalms 55:22
A contest entry
- 10 options for the creative poet (3) by bananasfoster42.
700 points, ended June 17, 2008, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I'd like some feedback.
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A delightful piece...
A delightful piece; instead of being weighed down by the troubles of this earth, we are to be more than conquerors by the power of His Spirit; keep fighting the good fight of faith; nicely done. --Joe
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Lovely write
I really thought this was lovely. IT has a very good message and I hope those reading it pay attention to that..
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Love the message and you state it boldy! Well done. Congrats on the hm.
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loved this poem! thanks for the entry
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This really has a lot to say and I think I listened. Very nice. Thank you for this today, I needed it!
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