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As i trust in you, you must trust in me
, as we face the circle we times by three
Love stands strong, love endure,
of one who’s strong and one who’s pure
Let the test of time, ruin us not, for our past we have not forgot
Our friendships remains let it be true
You love me and i love you

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mine n jessies chant

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  • Chrysalis
    June 30

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    ahhhh. magickally fit for chanting. I loved it. So sweet and I mean this.
    blessed be always
    "for I love me and I love you"
    lol.


  • Iridessa MoonFlower gold member
    June 29

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    This is so sweet Emma. I like it a lot. Short but straight to the point. Thank you for sharing.
    In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~


  • Passive
    June 27

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    very good, though i think you may have been better off removing the "s" in "friendships" in the second to last line.

    Also i would suggest removing the first comma in the fifth line.

  • brightXdarkness
    June 21
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    ooo a CHANT! That's pretty cool I love the ending, "you love me and I love you" It's like super cute! who is Jessie? lol umm... I guess a friend. wow. I'm dumb. But I love this, "love stands strong..." It makes me feel strong for some odd reason. Strange because I know I'm not love. lol Anyways, This was fun to read!

    Alex